第一段：描绘图像;第二段：使用正反举例证明绝望与旷达的间隔+总结句;第三段：建议一种旷达日子、旷达处世的人生情绪和人生哲学。思维拓宽
这篇文章也可以从世界观、人生观的视点下手。
相反，假定是一幅标明绝望厌世的图像，咱们也可以采纳相同的办法进行处置。
高分范文
As is apparently revealed in the cartoon above, the sheep lives happily in an optimistic state of mind, ignoring the threat of a dark shade, because he believes that where there is shadow, there is sunshine①. What is conveyed in the picture is both positive and illuminating。
As far as the purpose of the drawer is concerned, I think he intends to remind us of the importance of optimism. If the sheep in the cartoon feels anxious and pessimistic about the dark shade all day long, he can by no means have a comfortable and happy life. Examples like this are numerous, but I think the following one will be convincing enough. If there is half a cup of water, the pessimist may cry over it because they have only a half, while② the optimist may cheer for it because they still have a half. Obviously, they will have different perceptions and feelings③ toward the same life。
There is no denying that, most optimists have a high happiness index, which can hardly be experienced by pessimists. Therefore, we must read our life with a positive attitude. What’s more, the optimistic attitude can infect others strongly, meaning that we will find that all the friends around us are optimistic if we observe them in the same perspective. As a result, an atmosphere of optimism and happiness could be naturally set up. Therefore, let’s keep the famous line of Shelley, the well-known poet, in mind for ever, that is, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”④
佳作妙译
上面的漫画理解地体现出这只山羊不管阴影的挟制仍然坚持旷达，因为它信赖有阴影的当地就必定有阳光。图像中反映的疑问是活泼的和赋有启示性的。
我认为作者要表达的意义是要提示咱们坚持旷达心态的重要性。假定漫画中的山羊整天绝望地日子在阴影中，它将永久无法获得舒畅和夸姣的日子。类似的比方千千万，可是我认为下面的比方就满足有说服力。假定这儿有半杯水，绝望的人会诉苦只剩下半杯了，而旷达的人在幸亏还有半杯可以喝。显着，面临相同的日子，他们会有不一样的感触。
毫无疑问，旷达者具有更高的夸姣指数，而绝望者永久也领会不到。因而咱们有必要以活泼的情绪面临日子。而且旷达的心境能激烈地感染别人，这就意味着假定咱们以旷达的视角面临周围的兄弟
们，他们也会相同地旷达。所以，旷达和夸姣的气氛自可是然地就树立起来了。因而，让咱们把闻名诗人雪莱的名句铭记在心吧：冬天来了，春天还会远么?
教师点评
① where there is shadow, there is sunshine: 这句话读起来是不是很了解?
没错，它正是仿写了咱们非常了解的谚语“Where there is a will, there is a way”：有志者，事竟成。
作者将这句话仿写得有板有眼，可见作者对言语驾御是多么的熟练。
② while: 标明两种表象的比照、反差，常翻译成“而”。
③ perceptions and feelings: 近义词叠加。
近义词叠加也是一种向阅卷教师展示自个言语才能和词汇量的一种极为有用的办法。
翻译：只翻译出一种意思即可。即，这两个词合译为：感触。
④ Therefore, let’s keep the famous line of shelley, the well-known poet, in mind for ever, that is, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”
全文的点睛之笔，可谓经典。
首要：keep sth. in mind 这个词组用得很地道。
其次：引证了雪莱的诗歌，体现出了深沉的文明见识。
第三：the famous line=“If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”即后者为前者的同位语。
同位语的介入，使语句规划参差有致，层次清楚，朗朗上口。
第四：闻名诗句“If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”酣畅淋漓地诠氏缢旷达的日子情绪。
实践上，历年真题的阅览中又何尝没有呈现过这种仿照呢?广大考生可以去查阅2007年text 3中的最终一句：The financial fallout has begun, and the political fallout may not be far
behind。
⑤ 非常重要： 本题标题需求最终一段也可以会变成：
support your view with an example/examples。
这时分，咱们可以把文章的结束改写为：
Examples of optimistic attitude toward life can easily be found anywhere in our world. How would have Zhang Haidi, suffering from the high paraplegia, made such glowing achievements in life, without her strong mind and optimistic attitude? Facing the serious diseases and hardships in life, she did not choose to hold back. Instead, she has been courageous and optimistic enough to defeat them. She has set an excellent example for us.
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